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File www/quickstart.wiki part of check-in [7a2c37063a] - merge trunk into creole branch by bob on 2009-09-22 07:49:39. Also file www/quickstart.wiki part of check-in [849972ea0b] - Fix the name of the "fossil branch" command in the Quick Start document. Ticket 6445480b9bd2 by drh on 2009-09-19 14:42:31. [view]

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File www/quickstart.wiki part of check-in [e2431b17df] - Fix an issue with the command-line timeline. Fix typos in documentation. by drh on 2009-11-09 21:32:36. [view]

@@ -224,14 +224,14 @@
     repository: /home/proj1/repos1.fossil
     </b></blockquote>
 
     <p>Adjust the paths in this CGI script to match your installation
-    and make sure that repository file at the directory that contains it
-    are both readable and writable by the user that CGI scripts run as.
+    and make sure both repository file and the directory that contains it
+    are readable and writable by the user that CGI scripts run as.
     Then point clients at the CGI script.  That's all there is to it!</p>
 
     <a name="inetdserver"></a>
-    <p>You can also run fossil off of inetd or xinetd.  For an inetd
+    <p>You can also run fossil from inetd or xinetd.  For an inetd
     installation, make an entry in /etc/inetd.conf that looks something
     like this:</p>
 
     <blockquote><b>