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File www/build.html part of check-in [0e265b0184] - Documentation updates. Added Makefile. by drh on 2007-08-01 20:05:49. [view]

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File www/build.html part of check-in [b110d77c36] - Website updates. by drh on 2007-08-09 01:08:19. [view]

@@ -18,10 +18,10 @@
 <a href="http://fossil-scm.hwaci.com/fossil/login">
 http://fossil-scm.hwaci.com/fossil/login</a>.</p></li>
 
 <li><p>Log in as anonymous.  The password is shown on screen.
-The reason for requiring this login is to prevent help spiders from
-walking the walking the entire website, downloading ZIP archives
+The reason for requiring this login is to prevent spiders from
+walking the entire website, downloading ZIP archives
 of every historical version, and thereby soaking up all our bandwidth.</p></li>
 
 <li><p>Click on the
 <a href="http://fossil-scm.hwaci.com/fossil/timeline">Timeline</a> or
@@ -32,15 +32,15 @@
 link.  Note that you must successfully log in as "anonymous" in step 1
 above in order to see the link to the detailed version information.</p></li>
 
 <li><p>On the version information page, click on the
-"Zip Archive" link.  This build a ZIP archive of the complete source
-code and return it to your browser.</p></li>
+"Zip Archive" link.  This link will build a ZIP archive of the
+complete source code and download it to your browser.</p></li>
 </ol>
 
 <h2>2.0 Compiling</h2>
 
-<p>Follow these stops to compile:</p>
+<p>Follow these steps to compile:</p>
 
 <ol>
 <li value="6">
 <p>Create a directory to hold the source code.  Then unzip the