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SHA1 Hash:b110d77c366af7599dc49d860c3954f783af0c20
Date: 2007-08-09 01:08:19
User: drh
Comment:Website updates.
Timelines: ancestors | descendants | both | trunk
Other Links: files | ZIP archive | manifest

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Modified www/build.html from [0933d47927] to [6089f0b563].

@@ -17,12 +17,12 @@
 <li><p>Pointer your webbrowser at
 <a href="http://fossil-scm.hwaci.com/fossil/login">
 http://fossil-scm.hwaci.com/fossil/login</a>.</p></li>
 
 <li><p>Log in as anonymous.  The password is shown on screen.
-The reason for requiring this login is to prevent help spiders from
-walking the walking the entire website, downloading ZIP archives
+The reason for requiring this login is to prevent spiders from
+walking the entire website, downloading ZIP archives
 of every historical version, and thereby soaking up all our bandwidth.</p></li>
 
 <li><p>Click on the
 <a href="http://fossil-scm.hwaci.com/fossil/timeline">Timeline</a> or
 <a href="http://fossil-scm.hwaci.com/fossil/leaves">Leaves</a> link at
@@ -31,17 +31,17 @@
 <li><p>Select a version of of fossil you want to download.  Click on its
 link.  Note that you must successfully log in as "anonymous" in step 1
 above in order to see the link to the detailed version information.</p></li>
 
 <li><p>On the version information page, click on the
-"Zip Archive" link.  This build a ZIP archive of the complete source
-code and return it to your browser.</p></li>
+"Zip Archive" link.  This link will build a ZIP archive of the
+complete source code and download it to your browser.</p></li>
 </ol>
 
 <h2>2.0 Compiling</h2>
 
-<p>Follow these stops to compile:</p>
+<p>Follow these steps to compile:</p>
 
 <ol>
 <li value="6">
 <p>Create a directory to hold the source code.  Then unzip the
 ZIP archive you downloaded into that directory.  You should be

Modified www/index.html from [188269ac14] to [55770629c6].

@@ -29,22 +29,23 @@
 <li>Integrated bug tracking and wiki, along the lines of
 <a href="http://www.cvstrac.org/">CVSTrac</a> and
 <a href="http://www.edgewall.com/trac/">Trac</a>.</li>
 <li>Built-in web interface that supports deep archaeological digs through
 historical source code.</li>
-<li>All network communication via HTTP (so that everything works
-from behind restrictive firewalls).</li>
+<li>All network communication via
+<a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/HTTP">HTTP</a>
+(so that everything works from behind restrictive firewalls).</li>
 <li>Everything included in a single self-contained executable -
     trivial to install</li>
 <li>Server runs as <a href="http://www.w3.org/CGI/">CGI</a>, using
 <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/inetd">inetd</a> or
 <a href="http://www.xinetd.org/">xinetd</a> or using its own built-in,
 standalone web server.</li>
 <li>An entire project contained in single disk file (which also
 happens to be an <a href="http://www.sqlite.org/">SQLite</a> database.)</li>
 <li>Trivial to setup and administer</li>
-<li>Files and versions identified by their
+<li>Files and versions are identified by their
 <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/SHA-1">SHA1</a> signature.</a>
 Any unique prefix is sufficient to identify a file
 or version - usually the first 4 or 5 characters suffice.</li>
 <li>The file format is trival and requires nothing more complex
 than a text editor and the "sha1sum" command-line utility to decode.</li>

Modified www/pop.html from [13539df59a] to [c4c7a9be7e].

@@ -69,13 +69,13 @@
 <li><p>Every repository has a special file at the top-level
 named "manifest" which is an index of all other files in
 the system.  The manifest is automatically created and
 maintained by the system.</p></li>
 
-<li><p>The <a href="fileformat.html">file format</a>
-is very simple so that with access
+<li><p>The <a href="fileformat.html">file formats</a>
+used by Fossil are all very simple so that with access
 to the original content files, one can easily reconstruct
 the content of a baseline without the need for any
 special tools or software.</p></li>
 
 </body>
 </html>

Modified www/quickstart.html from [8e6c0f9e23] to [f9a5dc6ef0].

@@ -8,11 +8,11 @@
 
 <h2>Installing</h2><blockquote>
 
     <p>Fossil is a single self-contained C program that you need to
     <a href="build.html">install</a> before using.  Build the binary
-    and put is someplace on your PATH environment variable.</p>
+    and put it someplace on your PATH environment variable.</p>
 
     </blockquote>
     <h2>Cloning A Existing Repository</h2>
     <blockquote>
 
@@ -21,11 +21,11 @@
     <blockquote>
     <b>fossil clone</b> <i>URL  repository-filename</i>
     </blockquote>
 
     <p>The <i>URL</i> above is the http URL for the fossil repository
-    you want to clone.  The new repository can be called anything you
+    you want to clone.  You can call the new repository anything you
     want - there are no naming restrictions.  As an example, you can
     clone the fossil repository this way:</p>
 
     <blockquote>
     <b>fossil clone http://fossil-scm.hwaci.com/fossil myclone.fsl</b>
@@ -41,11 +41,11 @@
     </blockquote>
 
 </blockquote><h2>Configuring Your Local Repository</h2><blockquote>
 
     <p>When you create a new repository, either by cloning an existing
-    project or create a new project of your, you usually want to do some
+    project or create a new project of your own, you usually want to do some
     local configuration.  This is accomplished using a webbrowser.  First
     start a fossil webserver like this:</p>
 
     <blockquote>
     <b>fossil server </b><i> repository-filename</i>
@@ -111,12 +111,14 @@
     <blockquote>
     <b>fossil commit</b>
     </blockquote>
 
     <p>You will be prompted for check-in comments using whatever editor
-    is specified by your VISUAL or EDITOR environment variable.  After
-    you save your check-in comments, your changes will be checked in.</p>
+    is specified by your VISUAL or EDITOR environment variable.  If you
+    have GPG installed, you may be prompted for your GPG passphrase so
+    that the check-in can be signed with your GPG signature.  After
+    this your changes will be checked in.</p>
 
 </blockquote><h2>Sharing Changes</h2><blockquote>
 
     <p>The changes you <b>commit</b> are only on your local repository.
     To share those changes with other repositories, do:</p>
@@ -203,11 +205,11 @@
     80 stream tcp nowait.1000 root /usr/bin/fossil \<br>
         /usr/bin/fossil http /home/proj1/repos1.fsl
     </b></blockquote>
 
     <p>Adjust the paths to suit your installation, of course.  Notice that
-    fossil runs as run.  This is not required - you can run it as an
+    fossil runs as root.  This is not required - you can run it as an
     unprivileged user.  But it is more secure to run fossil as root.
     When you do run fossil as root, it automatically puts itself in a
     chroot jail in the same directory as the repository, then drops
     root privileges prior to reading any information from the request.</p>