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Date: 2008-06-02 15:18:39
User: drh
Comment:Documentation tweaks.
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Modified www/build.wiki from [75b978c24a] to [5ba110240e].

@@ -16,13 +16,13 @@
 <p>Fossil is self-hosting, so you can obtain a ZIP archive containing
 a snapshot of the latest version directly from fossil's own fossil
 repository.  Follow these steps:</p>
 
 <ol>
-<li><p>Pointer your webbrowser at
-<a href="http://www.fossil-scm.org/fossil/login">
-http://www.fossil-scm.org/fossil/login</a>.</p></li>
+<li><p>Pointer your web browser at
+<a href="http://www.fossil-scm.org/">
+http://www.fossil-scm.org/</a>.  Click on the "Login" menu button.</p></li>
 
 <li><p>Log in as anonymous.  The password is shown on screen.
 The reason for requiring this login is to prevent spiders from
 walking the entire website, downloading ZIP archives
 of every historical version, and thereby soaking up all our bandwidth.</p></li>

Modified www/index.wiki from [da0f0aa613] to [0332519f4d].

@@ -12,11 +12,11 @@
 we expect it to be available soon.)
 Fossil is
 <a href="http://www.fossil-scm.org/fossil/timeline">self-hosting</a>
 since 2007-07-21 on
 <a href="http://www.hwaci.com/cgi-bin/fossil/timeline">two separate servers</a>.
-You can download the lastest sources
+You can download the lastest sources and
 compile it yourself using the instructions below.
 Or you can grab
 <a href="http://www.fossil-scm.org/download.html">precompiled binaries</a>.
 </p>
 
@@ -91,13 +91,11 @@
 <li><a href="quickstart.wiki">Quick Start</a> guide to using fossil
 <li>Fossil supports <a href="embeddeddoc.wiki">embedded documentation</a>
     that is versioned along with project source code.</li>
 <li>The <a href="selfcheck.wiki">automatic self-check</a> mechanism
 helps insure project integrity.</li>
-<li>The <a href="http://www.fossil-scm.org/fossil/wiki">self-hosting
-    fossil wiki</a>, capable of hosting static pages and community-editable wiki
-    content.</li>
+<li>Fossil contains a [/wiki | built-in wiki].</li>
 <li>There is a
     <a href="http://lists.fossil-scm.org:8080/cgi-bin/mailman/listinfo/fossil-users">
     mailing list</a> available for discussing fossil issues.</li>
 </ul>
 

Modified www/quickstart.wiki from [ca1d98afc1] to [29d30ac723].

@@ -35,11 +35,11 @@
     call the new repository anything you want - there are no naming
     restrictions.  As an example, you can clone the fossil repository
     this way:</p>
 
     <blockquote>
-    <b>fossil clone http://www.fossil-scm.org/fossil myclone.fossil</b>
+    <b>fossil clone http://www.fossil-scm.org/ myclone.fossil</b>
     </blockquote>
 
     <p>The new local copy of the respository is stored in a single file,
     which in the example above is named "myclone.fossil".
     You can name your repositories anything you want.  The ".fossil" suffix
@@ -59,18 +59,18 @@
 
 </blockquote><h2>Configuring Your Local Repository</h2><blockquote>
 
     <p>When you create a new repository, either by cloning an existing
     project or create a new project of your own, you usually want to do some
-    local configuration.  This is accomplished using a webbrowser.  First
-    start a fossil webserver like this:</p>
+    local configuration.  This is easily accomplished using the webserver
+    that is built into fossil.  Start the fossil webserver like this:</p>
 
     <blockquote>
     <b>fossil ui </b><i> repository-filename</i>
     </blockquote>
 
-    <p>This creates a mini-webserver listening on port 8080.  You can
+    <p>This creates starts webserver listening on port 8080.  You can
     specify a different port using the <b>-port</b> option on the command-line.
     After the server is running, fossil will then attempt to launch your
     web browser and make it point to this web server.  If your system
     has an unusual configuration, fossil might not be able to figure out
     how to start your web browser.  In that case, start the web browser