SHA1 Hash:	1db8656f68f754caa2af00c1f9fe7c3c7d74916f
Date:	2008-05-29 12:10:35
User:	drh
Comment:	On-line documentation tweaks.
Timelines:	ancestors | descendants | both | trunk
Other Links:	files | ZIP archive | manifest

• branch=trunk inherited from [a28c83647d]
• sym-trunk inherited from [a28c83647d]

Modified www/embeddeddoc.wiki from [eaa1cfadcf] to [560048999c].

@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
 <h1>Managing Project Documentation</h1>
 
-Fossil provides a built-in wiki which can be used to store the
+Fossil provides a built-in [/wiki | wiki] that can be used to store the
 documentation for a project.  This is sufficient for many projects.
 If your project is well-served by wiki documentation, then you
 need read no further.
 
 But fossil also supports embedding project documentation as
@@ -49,11 +49,12 @@
 checked-in baseline.  This is useful if you want to see the very latest
 version of the documentation.  The "<b>ckout</b>" keywords means to
 pull the documentation file from the local source tree on disk, not
 from the any versioned baseline.  The "<b>ckout</b>" keyword normally
 only works when you start your server using the "<b>fossil server</b>"
-command line and is intented to show what the documenation you are currently
+or "<b>fossil ui</b>"
+command line and is intented to show what the documentation you are currently
 editing looks like before you check it in.
 
 Finally, the <i>&lt;filename&gt;</i> element of the URL is the full
 pathname of the documentation file starting from the root of the source
 tree.

Modified www/index.wiki from [ffb7fca9e6] to [da0f0aa613].

@@ -6,11 +6,11 @@
 distributed software revision control system</a> that includes an integrated
 <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wiki">Wiki</a> and an integrated
 <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bugtracker">
 bug-tracking system</a> all in a single easy-to-use stand-alone
 executable.
-(NB: The bug-tracker component is still not completely functional yet, but
+(NB: The bug-tracker component is not yet completely functional, but
 we expect it to be available soon.)
 Fossil is
 <a href="http://www.fossil-scm.org/fossil/timeline">self-hosting</a>
 since 2007-07-21 on
 <a href="http://www.hwaci.com/cgi-bin/fossil/timeline">two separate servers</a>.
@@ -87,11 +87,11 @@
 
 <ul>
 <li>The <a href="concepts.wiki">concepts</b> behind fossil</li>
 <li><a href="build.wiki">Building And Installing</a></li>
 <li><a href="quickstart.wiki">Quick Start</a> guide to using fossil
-<li>Fossil support <a href="embeddeddoc.wiki">embedded documentation</a>
+<li>Fossil supports <a href="embeddeddoc.wiki">embedded documentation</a>
     that is versioned along with project source code.</li>
 <li>The <a href="selfcheck.wiki">automatic self-check</a> mechanism
 helps insure project integrity.</li>
 <li>The <a href="http://www.fossil-scm.org/fossil/wiki">self-hosting
     fossil wiki</a>, capable of hosting static pages and community-editable wiki